Showing posts with label composition. Show all posts
Showing posts with label composition. Show all posts

Saturday, February 25, 2012

Karma, Statistics, Repetition and God’s Plan or, Even More Eagle Creek Images

This is Yolanta (not her real name). She’s from Kazakhstan (No, she isn’t). I know what you’re thinking. “Poor girl!” you worry, “With looks like that, how will she ever acquire a husband?” Fortunately for Yolanta, they still have arranged marriages where she comes from. 

When my car engine blew up, Yolanta was kind enough to give me a ride to and from work until I was able to get it fixed (we work at the same company). She refused to take money for gas but eventually agreed to take one of my photographs instead.


This was the photograph she originally chose. It’s the punchbowl at Eagle Creek at the end of January in 2010.

I immediately had an enlargement made. But when I picked up the enlargement, I found the image to be unacceptably grainy.


In the figure below, the image on the left shows how the picture looked straight out of the camera. The image on the right shows how the picture (the one that Yolanta chose) looked after selective brightening and color saturation (I liked how brightening the water revealed details of the rocky river-bed). Since I typically use small-file-size/low resolution images for web content, this kind of picture manipulation didn’t appear to be causing any obvious degradation in quality… at least for web use. However, ordering a 12 x 18 inch enlargement showcased the ‘quality compromise’ I had not been aware I was making.

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The enlargement (below) shows how ‘grain’ became much more noticeable in the brightened image.

And so began my quest to procure the ‘definitive picture’ of the Eagle Creek punch bowl for Yolanta lest the scales of Karma be irretrievably unbalanced.


In August of 2010, I took another hike up the Eagle Creek Trail, certain I could capture an image that Yolanta would like. I presented her with the following options: 

Option 1.  Tried to recreate the same picture as before but with more attention to the rocky riverbed. Used a longer exposure to cut down on distracting ripples. The reflection of the sky is distracting. 

Option 2. Tried to compose a shot without the distracting reflection in the foreground. Kind of felt like this angle creates an inviting sense of mystery…to wonder what is around the corner. Picked up on some emerald greens in the deep water and tried to emphasize them while post processing. 

Option 3. Tried to show the waterfall in its greater context.

Option 4.  Post processed this one to match the warm brown colors from the original January picture. 

Option 5. A slightly different angle revealing more canyon features.

She didn’t like any of them.

So I went back the following weekend to give it another shot. This time I was accompanied by fellow photo enthusiast Mr. T. 

Mr. T. displaying his bionic calves. 

Give an infinite number of cameras to an infinite number of monkeys, and pretty soon, one of them has got to take a decent picture of this waterfall. But that’s a pretty expensive way to do photography. 

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Tried some vertical compositions 

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                                          Scott-O-vision                   Mr. T

I find it very interesting to see how different people approach the same subject. 

 Photo credit: Mr. T.

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Photo credit: Mr. T. 


Mr. T. reviewed my pictures using the LCD screen on the back of my camera. “Why don’t you have any close-ups of the waterfall?” He asked. “After all, that’s what you came to take a picture of.”  He showed me his pictures which included this close-up (I find the blue tint un-natural so tried to eliminate it).

I didn’t really have an answer so I probably just stood there gasping like a fish for a while, wondering why it really didn’t even occur to me.

In retrospect, I guess it’s because I’ve taken quite a few waterfall pictures, and up close, it’s always the same idea – that is – without their context, they all look alike to me.



This time when I showed Yolanta all the pictures I’d taken, she picked this one -
just a throw-away shot of some un-named stream flowing into the creek.

I guess there’s a sermon in there somewhere – something about beauty arriving from unexpected directions.

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 Something about seeing every day with new eyes.

 Something about getting up early and taking that trail again…

 …because …

















Saturday, January 14, 2012

SHOOT the ST. JOHNS BRIDGE

(Your Mission Should You Decide to Accept It)


St. Johns Bridge 01-08-2012

Bernadette told me about the class. It was advertised as a Paddle-sports Photography Clinic, organized by Alder Creek Kayak and Canoe, and presented by Neil Schulman (www.neilschulman.com)

It was also free.

I bring it up because in retrospect, I think the big take-home message I distilled from the evening might have helped me with my ongoing efforts to take a decent picture of the St. Johns Bridge, a bridge that demands - like a girlfriend on the third week of a rigorous diet - only flattering pictures.



I took this picture from my kayak several years ago on a hot summer day. I think it was the reflection that caught my attention. Blue is supposed to be a cool color, but on that day it was so bright it was blinding. If you turn the thermostat up to 95 and pour some salt water in your eyes, you’ll get some idea of what it was like. I’ll be damned if I understand how the picture can still come out looking refreshing.




This picture is also from that same day. I like how the off center bridge makes me think it’s trying to avoid me…
as if it’s trying to get around me…
…going somewhere important.

But if it sparks any reactions like that in you, it’s completely an accident.
I think I was just trying to make pretty pictures of the things I saw on a trip up the Willamette. Perhaps it’s like a travelogue, “Here we have the beautiful gothic tower of the longest suspension bridge west of the Mississippi (at least in 1931).

But that’s it.
Those two pictures.
The best shots of the St. Johns Bridge I could muster.



Last February, my corporeal friend Mr. T. accompanied me down the Willamette and I got another chance to try my hand at photographing the bridge, but ended up with yet another travelogue snapshot, “Here we gain some impression of the vast scale of the beautiful gothic towers of the St. Johns Bridge by purposefully using Mr. T as a foreground element.”




So the take home message? For me it was, “Evoke – Don’t Narrate.”
Mr. Schulman said several disparaging things about narrative images. That’s when I started feeling a little bit self conscious, cause…well you know…narrative images.
I slouched down in my chair a little bit which was silly because it isn’t like anybody was going to recognize me. I wanted to argue that telling a story with a picture is a good thing. But I decided to listen and what Mr. Schulman said started to make sense. As I think about it, I’m not sure he meant ‘narrative’.  Maybe a better word would have been ‘literal’.  On the other hand, he could have really meant ‘narrative’.
Never mind.
The point is, when we are out in the world, we can’t help but have emotional responses to it, and evidently good photos make people feel an emotional response. The question for the photographer becomes how to convey those emotions in a photograph.

Mr. Schulman thinks that maybe being thematically intentional will help one to make images that evoke feelings, because such images will have a subject or meaning. It’s hard to explain, but it’s something like what would happen if I approached the scene above as a metaphor for bridging the gap between two cultures instead of attempting a technical drawing-like representation of the structure of a suspension bridge.




I don’t really think it has been my practice to go out intentionally thinking of themes. I guess I just head out with a vague idea of maybe taking a picture of a bridge or something. It’s almost like I hope something will ‘speak’ to me.




One night I walked around cathedral park after dark, wondering if the St. Johns’ neighborhood was the tough part of town or not. Sometimes I feel pretty vulnerable trying to set up long exposure shots, bent intently over the tripod and fighting with my bifocals for a clean line of sight into the viewfinder.




I recently made a concentrated effort to get a satisfying picture of the St. Johns Bridge and found some pretty decent vantage points along the ramp to the west end of the bridge. But all of this occurred well before the clinic, so I wasn’t yet trying to be thematically intentional. Looking back with what I know now, I’d say this is just a narrative/literal snapshot.





Mr. Schulman said he thinks the language of composition is ‘hardwired’ into all of our brains. He didn’t even want to talk about it very much, insisting that if you go out and take a lot of pictures, you’ll automatically begin to refine your sense of composition.

Walking up the road to the bridge, I stumbled upon an entrance to Forest Park’s Ridge Trail. With all the deciduous trees stripped of their leaves, I managed to find a few viable vantage points.

The 200mm zoom lens I’m using here kind of compresses the length of the long middle span so that the arc of the deck is emphasized…which to me, kind of speaks to the principle of ‘suspension’. The lazy counter arc of the main cables belies the heavy work the suspension cables perform. Unfortunately, I’m not using a tripod so I’ve tried to hide how ‘not tack sharp’ this image is by over post-processing it.




Do you think people would get upset if I cut a couple of trees down so I could get a clear shot?




Off trail a little bit, I found what appeared to be a primitive hobo camp with a mostly unobstructed viewpoint. It’s sort of an uncomfortable feeling to lug camera gear into isolated areas that show signs of sketchy habitation. There’s no telling what’s in those plastic bags. It could be stashed blankets, or a Mexican drug cartel stash…or maybe your wife’s head. I ended up feeling a little bit like goldilocks, hoping the three bears didn’t come home too soon… or those banjo players from Deliverance.




I don’t know…I guess it’s the kind of paranoia that’s fostered from the sight of syphilitic mice shuffling away from moss covered stairs and incongruously placed books along the path leading into the dark woods.



At first, some kind of psychological compulsion required me to include the entirety of  the signature gothic towers in my attempted compositions. 



The St. Johns Bridge: Entrance to Oregon’s own Gotham City.



This was my favorite shot, but without a tripod, it suffers from motion blur.



On a subsequent trip with tripod, pepper spray, and other defensive weapons, I tried to re-create my favorite scene. I still struggled with whether or not to amputate the front tower or not. In the end, evidently, I kept zooming in closer. Don’t ask me why. Ask my hard wired sense of composition.


f-14.0,  shutter-60 seconds, ISO-100 



These pictures were also taken before the clinic. But it kind of shows what I mean about hoping something will ‘speak’ to me. For the picture on the left, I walked out onto the span, familiarizing myself with the shapes and the lines and the weight of them. I liked how the first tower framed the second (enough to stand stupidly in the road with my back towards traffic) and how the road rises and hides what may be coming. Doorways and portals just naturally reek with symbolism, and so even without Mr. Schulman’s advice about ‘evoking meaning’, I think these photos may still have captured something evocative. For the picture on the right, I meant to explore underneath the bridge, but as the bridge came into sight, I could see the setting sun was illuminating only one of the towers, and I thought maybe that might work like a really cool spotlight and so… I framed it.







Here, three intrepid sperm swim toward the cervix, but only Sparky (on the left) has had the foresight to bring alcohol beverages with which to seduce the egg.






So I’ll have to go back again with a theme in mind and see if that helps.
If you should happen to capture an image of the St. Johns Bridge that turns out to be evocative, I’d be happy to post it here. Maybe we could all learn something?


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